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The Tale of Death

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Post  jessecast Mon Sep 03, 2012 7:34 am

Tamer

Name: Jesse Alexander Greenhaven
-Nickname: Jesse, or Death
Age: 17
Height: 5'11
Weight:145
Physical Description:
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Jesse is this 5'11 pale white almost grey skinny kid. He has black long hair that goes to his collar, and split down the middle. He tends to wear a bone like hat that covers only half his head and has a horn like design. His eyes are a dark green the same as his birthmark under his eyes. He tends to wear blue cargo jeans, and a white belt that hangs down to the left. He always wears his white Jacket, and dark dark teal collard long sleeve shirt. He never sport a smile unless someone is in pain.
-Special Markings: Jesse has a black 4 tattoo on his chest along with a green birthmark running down both his cheeks under his eyes, almost like tears.
Personality: Jess is a calm collective person who tries to stay out of people's business. He tends to be completely emotionless most the time, but when he is hurting someone he tends to smile. The only person Jesse shows the slightest bit of compassion for id JD and even that is only because JD is the key to his plans.
History: As a kid growing up Jesse had numerous medical problems. Some which hospitalized him for months at end giving rise to kids his age calling him Death. At first he hated that name but then started to embrace it by the time he was 8 years old and his skin became a permanent pale grey color, due to a medication he was taking. When he wasn't in the hospital Jesse would constantly get into fights with kids that picked on him. His parents could barely handle being in the same room as him let alone the same house. They mainly never talked to him directly just left notes for him and let him do what he wanted. Jesse found this pleasant for awhile, but eventually between the bullies and his parents his outlook and things became negative. He started believing the world would be better off in pieces then with humans alive. By the time of his 10 birthday he became bitter, ruthless, and nearly emotionless to everyone. Then a week after his birthday his parents told the doctors to put him into a comma until he was 17 so they don't have to raise him anymore. For the most part the doctors were refusing until Jesse's parents paid them a large sum of money. With 7 years of his life being lived through a dream and his thoughts he began to resent all life. He also started his creation of a digivice that he nicknamed the digislasher. After creating the digislasher his dream kept having the digital world popping in and out. On his 17th birthday he woke up from the comma only to find he wasn't in the real world he was inside the place he kept dreaming about, the Digital World. He was wearing clothes he had never seen before except in his dreams and he had a digislasher. When he touched a button on the digislasher his partner JD, a gomamon x, appeared.
Digivice Color:
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Guard Team: Collection Claw

Digimon

Name: JD
Species Gomamon X
-Genus Gomamon
Physical Description: JD is has 50% more mass than most gomamon he is taller and more muscular. His fur isn't the normal white it is a darkish shade of grey. He has the same color eyes as his tamer. The fur on his head and around his neck is a white while is stripes are black.
Personality: JD is completely loyal to his tamer Jesse and has the same goal as him. Unlike his tamer though he tends to be friendly in order to trick people into helping them.
D.Skill:
Slasher Mode
Digimon is transformed into a more human-like apperance and is given two katanas. As a result of this transformation the digimon's speed and strength is doubled. This lasts 2 posts and for 10 post(or the end of the thread) his speed and strength is cut by 3/4 of his original, and he reverts back into his regular form. This ability can only be used one per thread.


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Post  Ginrai Wed Sep 05, 2012 4:14 pm

your d.skill is too powerful, theres no set back to it, nor is there a time limit on how long it can be active or inactive
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Post  jessecast Wed Sep 05, 2012 10:37 pm

finished and updated

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Post  Ginrai Thu Sep 06, 2012 1:22 am

Your D.Skill is still broken, the strength increase is to long and doesnt outweigh the drawback and the rest time is to small. If anything it should be a once per thread type ability. Digivolution type abilities are difficult to have
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Post  jessecast Thu Sep 06, 2012 1:34 am

Ok it has been edited again

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Post  Ginrai Thu Sep 06, 2012 2:54 am

You didnt choose a guard team; other than that your profile is good
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Post  jessecast Thu Sep 06, 2012 9:51 am

Sorry lol finished it without my contacts in XD

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